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Teachers should assign daily homework to students Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people argue that
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homework
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 when they should do it in class with their professors to resolve their doubts. Personally, I believe that
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 should have
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 studies.I feel
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 way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
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 of all, The
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 hours in schools with different professors, where they have to be focusing to learn about the assignments and improve their skills. All
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 need
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 to spend with their families,
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and friends
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 or simply to do sports because is important for
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them that can
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disconnect
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 studies to develop a good attitude for the
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. My own experience is a compelling example of
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. When I was studying for my career, I remember that I had
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 to spend with my family and friends because I was at
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 all day and, when I arrived at my house, I just wanted to go to my bed because I felt very tired, but I had to do my
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 ,when I realized it was already so many in the morning.
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 as an extra job, some
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 spend more than 3 hours doing their
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, which is too much for them. In fact,
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 situation can provoke inequalities between
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 , above all if
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 are children because some parents can help their children, but others parents don't have much
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 to help their children, so when
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 and they don't have their
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 , they can receive a punishment.
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,
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 can cause frustration for them and can come to hate the
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 and even drop out
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school
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.
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, My sister drooped out of
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 when she was a teenager because she felt frustrated about her studies and she just wanted to have more
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 for herself. In conclusion, I strongly believe that all
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 should have more breaks to spend on different activities
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and to participate freely in cultural life, sports and friends.
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, teachers should change the way to teach so that all
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 have the right to rest.
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