Write a letter to the television channel Manager about boring programs during the day time. Tell him about the programs, give suggestions.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with some boring programs that are being presented on your channel
Firstly
, I am a big fan of your channel, so I feel it is my duty to disclose my opinion; consequently
, the quality of your programs will be enhanced. Firstly
, some of these shows present low-quality content, in addition
, it is not related to real life; accordingly
, you will lose the majority of your viewers. Secondly
, it is remarkable that the scripts are written in an inappropriate way, and some of your presenters need to be more professional.
I would like to recommend to you that, it would be better to make some training activities for your cast, also
you could hire a new talented director with a creative sight and high energy. Thus
, will attract viewers again, and contribute to ameliorating the revenue.
Hopefully, you will pay immediate attention to this
matter.
Yours Faithfully,
RehamSubmitted by rehameldweik on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite