It is common practice for some students to take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
It is usual among a few few
students
that
they take a small break before joining Correct word choice
apply
college
instead
they work or travelling
. The main Wrong verb form
travel
benefits
of Fix the agreement mistake
benefit
this
is
they can earn money for Change the verb form
are
college
fees and gain knowledge; however
, the key drawback of this
is they lose interest in studies
and earn less in future. I think that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
There are Correct pronoun usage
their studies
few
benefits of having a gap Correct article usage
a few
in
between school and Change preposition
apply
college
. Students
can do some part-time jobs and earn money in order to reduce burden
Add an article
the burden
for
parents. Change preposition
on
In addition
to this
, most of the students
travel during this
time and gain knowledge about the neighbouring countries. For example
, In the United States
most of the small restaurants are filled with teenagers after completing schooling stated that they earn money to pay their Add a comma
,States
college
fees.
Apart from the advantages
there areAdd a comma
,advantages
Correct article usage
a
Correct your spelling
disadvantages
disavantages
like interest Correct your spelling
disadvantages
on
education might reduce as they feel lazy again to study and attend exams. Change preposition
in
Also
, once they start earning and living on their own they might feel this
is enough for their life. As result, they get paid less because they don't have any degree in getting a
highest paid jobs. Correct article usage
the
For instance
, In South Africa
the percentage of Add a comma
,Africa
students
completing schooling is not even close to the percentage of people who joined colleges.
To conclude, It is common for a few students
to take a break before joining further
studies. I think that the disadvantages outweigh the benefits because they dont
like to continue their studies and end up getting less-paid jobs even though they get job experience and pay their own fees.Correct your spelling
don't
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