Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While
newspapers
are considered to be the most effective way for
information
absorption, social
media
is thought to be better. From my point of view,
although
social
media
is quite effective in updating the news,
newspapers
prove themselves to be the better method.
On the other hand
, there are some advantages of social
media
platforms.
Firstly
, they allow readers to stay up-to-date with the latest
information
.
In other words
, the virtual ream online not only updates data on a regular basis
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but
also
broadcasts current events live. In fact, people all over the world are being kept informed by social
media
about the course of the war in Ukraine.
Secondly
, while people have to pay a total of 10 dollars monthly to read
newspapers
, social
media
seems to be a more economical way as individuals just need half of the dollars for monthly
newspapers
to access
information
.
On the other hand
, I believe that learning
information
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newspapers
is more beneficial. Articles in
newspapers
are always written by professional journalists with
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layout
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, formal lexical
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, diverse forms and column divisions for easy understanding by readers,
therefore
, not only helping you understand more quickly and easily
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but
also
enhancing your verbal skills.
Furthermore
, learning news from
newspapers
can avoid the risk of being eye-sighted. A review of 20 studies of problematic internet use on two groups of people, one with
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media
reading and one with
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newspaper reading, in 2020 reported that 20
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of the subjects in
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media
reading experienced short-sightedness, while
this
figure is incredibly small in
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newspaper reading, only at 2
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. In conclusion, while social
media
comes in handy for learning news, I still believe that
newspapers
are a more useful tool.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • news coverage
  • perspectives
  • opinions
  • accessed
  • interactive
  • engaging
  • real-time
  • multimedia
  • combination
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