Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Alternative
medicine
is not new. It is accepted that it pre-dates conventional
medicine
and it is still used by many people all over the world. I do not agree that it is dangerous, and feel that
both
alternative
and conventional
medicine
can be useful. There are several reasons why the conventional medical community is often dismissive of alternatives. 
Firstly
, there has been little scientific research into
such
medicine
, so there is a scarcity of evidence to support the claims of their supporters.
Furthermore
, people often try
such
treatment because of recommendations from friends, and
therefore
come to the therapist with a very positive attitude, which may be part of the reason for the cure.
Moreover
, these
therapies
are usually only useful for long-term, chronic conditions. Acute medical problems,
such
as accidental injury, often require more conventional methods.
On the other hand
, there remain strong arguments for the use of alternatives.  Despite the lack of scientific proof, there is a lot of anecdotal evidence to suggest that these
therapies
work.
In addition
, far from being dangerous, they often have few or no side effects, so the worst outcome would be no change. One of the strongest arguments for the effectiveness of
alternative
therapies
in the West is that, whilst conventional
medicine
is available without charge, many people are prepared to pay considerable sums for alternatives. If they were totally unhelpful, it would be surprising if
this
continued. To conclude, I strongly believe that conventional
medicine
and
alternative
therapies
can and should coexist. They have different strengths, and can
both
be used effectively to target particular medical problems. The best situation would be for
alternative
therapies
to be used to support and complement conventional
medicine
. The essay has a well-balanced argument looking at
both
sides of the issue. The
first
body paragraph expresses some doubt about
alternative
therapies
 (...little scientific research.. .only useful for long term...), but in the
second
body ,paragraph the writer takes a different view (
On the other hand
...) and examines the benefits (...few side effects).  The writer's concluding paragraph offers a strong opinion (I strongly believe...) and sums up the fact that
both
types of treatment are valid today.
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