Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Every people living in

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world have faced several problems since

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of the time.

Traffic

and pollution is the current one which people are facing. There is much debate over whether rising the

price

of

petrol

is

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important method to overcome expanding

traffic

and

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pollution

polution

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pollution

problems or not. I completely disagree with the statement because

of

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curbing isn't

a

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advantageous and renewable

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resources

resouces

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resource

. Nowadays, travel is

the

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significant issue in growing cities so transport is a necessity for everyone. Governments should create some new solution ways

instead

of

try

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to restrict

the

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access

of

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petrol

.

For example

, in Turkey,

petrol

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the petrol

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price

is increased by

government

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the government

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,

however

citizens

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the citizens

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of Turkey continue to take

petrol

for their demands.

Therefore

governments need to create some ways to overcome

this

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situation

stuation

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situation

such

as developing the transportation system. They may be increased the railway system

besides

making roads.

Thus

both they can deal with pollution and

traffic

thanks to trains.To sum up, every people need to go

to

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somewhere

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ever

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day and increasing

petrol

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the petrol

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price

is not a beneficial way to handle

traffic

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the traffic

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. Other fuels may be encouraged by countries to use in vehicles

such

as electric and solar energy.

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, both Turkey and some European countries, make AR-GE over

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electric cars. Pollution is the primary reason for

this

investigation. In

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addition

additon

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addition

, they try to use solar energy in a more effective way than now. Many experts, concerning

this

issue, highlight that if

car

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cars

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use these things for fuel

instead

of

petrol

,

ıt

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it

would be more

environmentalist

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three times.

Therefore

, the obvious step is needed to be taken by countries

promote

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the

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new fuel sources. In conclusion,

prevent

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to prevent

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traffic

and

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pollution

polution

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pollution

,

increasing

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price

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policy of

petrol

can be seen

a

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crucial

critical

crutial

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crucial

way, yet restricting

to

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access to

petrol

is

not

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no

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impediment

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an impediment

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for

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this

issue. What's more, renewable

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sources

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souces

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sources

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such

as

electric

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and solar energy can

be solve

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this

problem better.