Some people think young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Studying is a vital part of a better future for any individual. It is suggested by some folks that adolescents should take part distinctively in the

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till the age of 18 years. Considering the fact that

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certainly are not necessarily required for those who want to excel in careers like arts or sports etc.,

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I disagree with the argument and will explain in detail as perused

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.

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, students should have different interests or talents other than

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,

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compelling them for

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will be wasting of time and effort for them,

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, one of my friends was interested in

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from his childhood days and he was an excellent batsman,

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he opts to take a drop from

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for

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coaching. Currently, he is playing

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at the state level and enjoying his passion.

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, in the contemporary era, everyone including parents is aware of the

advantage

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of studying which is evident from the recent survey conducted by one of the prominent agencies that the number of

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dropouts is declining.

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, people who favour mandatory

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till adulthood believe that after adulthood they will anyway face other responsibilities including earning their living, so younger ones should devote their time to

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up to

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age before they are inducted into professional life.

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,

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is only applicable to students who want to excel in their

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and not to other younger ones who chose the non-educational fields.

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, the legendary cricketer Sachin Tendulkar was a

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dropout and played

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from

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of 14.

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, compulsory education will deter their progress. In conclusion, young people should be able to decide their career path in consultation with their parents and they should not

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to do full-time

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until and unless it is allowed by their future plans.