With increased of global demand of oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

In the whole world

needs

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of

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gas

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and oil

are

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growing day by day and the regions that are still not discovered with more possessing should shard to get these things. I completely agree with

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opinion and

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essay will show the economic point of view of a

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and how

much upgraded

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machineries

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is useful. To commence with, there are many poor countries in the world with a lot of

source

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of oil and

gas

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that are still not invented because of their lack of knowledge about

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, and the economic situation of that

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is

also

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not that

much

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high so it was difficult for them to start these process of discoveries.

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, Burundi is a small, poor

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of

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Africa and they had a ton of

sources

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first level

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like America and Australia etc. if

they

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can come forward to open up these resources from Burundi

then

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it will be a great scope to solve

this

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consistency.

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, for lacking

of

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upgraded

equipment’s

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many more

medium range

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country

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countries

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could not release these

sources

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that are already discovered.

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, Bangladesh is a developing

country

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and there are recently some

gas

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sources

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found in

village

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area

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but they could not derive it. If it is possible to manage or import any

kinds

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of upgrade machine for collecting these resources,

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obviously that will be

a

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get support to solve

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a problem

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problem

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problems

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that

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apply

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related to that issue. To conclude, for solving the need that

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an increased

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increased

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of

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in

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oil and

gas

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can be solved by providing

an

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economical support to poor

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country

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countries

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by

rich

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the rich

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where there is a source

and

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apply

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another option is by using

some

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an

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upgraded

machine

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machines

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it

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which

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is possible to release some

sources

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that are already discovered.