Write a letter to your friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your business. In your letter: Give a brief description of the business Mention what you’d like to be there on the website Provide some ideas on use of images on the web site.

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Dear John, I’m writing to ask for your help to create a website for my online clothing shop. As you know, I started selling clothes online through Facebook a couple of months ago. As the demand has grown, I could not manage to tend to enquiries.

Therefore

, I need to develop a website where my customers can browse through the products easily. The main contents would be the home page, the product details and contact details. It’s important to have the background story of how my business started to inspire customers.

In addition

, detailed information about each product featured needs to be uploaded.

Last

but not least, I would like to have a Q&A page and contact details for customers to give feedback or get their questions answered. As it is female clothing, I would like you to make sure that the images used are enticing enough for them to purchase my products. It’d be better if you can attach about 5 photos of different angles of each product for their easy reference. Another important thing is to make some space to include size measurements. Please let me know if you could help me to work on my website. I am looking forward to your reply. Thanks in advance! Regards, Yi

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8 paragraphs

211 words

9.00

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think is a positive or a negative development?

It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?