You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbor Mr. Smith complained. Write a formal letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

Dear
Mr.
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Smith, Please accept my sincere apologies for the inconvenience that was caused
last
week. It was my birthday, so I had a party
in
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my house. But things did not go as planned. Some of my friends not only got heavily afflicted by the alcohol but they
also
turned the music up. Entering the music room, I could not reach the speakers to turn the volume down. Noone let me get even close because they just wanted me to relax and have fun. As long-known friends and
neighbours
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I am well aware that mistakes like
this
are not tolerated. I assure you that
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inconvenience will not ever happen again. Once again, sincerest apologies for the headache I brought you. Yours sincerely, Michael Woodberry
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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