You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbor Mr. Smith complained. Write a formal letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Dear

Mr.

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Smith, Please accept my sincere apologies for the inconvenience that was caused

last

week. It was my birthday, so I had a party

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my house. But things did not go as planned. Some of my friends not only got heavily afflicted by the alcohol but they

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turned the music up. Entering the music room, I could not reach the speakers to turn the volume down. Noone let me get even close because they just wanted me to relax and have fun. As long-known friends and

neighbours

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I am well aware that mistakes like

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are not tolerated. I assure you that

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inconvenience will not ever happen again. Once again, sincerest apologies for the headache I brought you. Yours sincerely, Michael Woodberry

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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

126 words

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You had a birthday party and you were playing loud music. Your neighbor Mr. Smith complained. Write a formal letter of apology explaining that it was a special occasion and that it won't happen again.

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Some people think that reading is always a good habit, others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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At schools, students should only be taught academic knowledge to pass the exams, and skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should be learned from family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree?