Nowadays, more people prefer to communicate via text message and email instead of face to face. Why do you think this is the best way? When is face to face communication necessary/

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, everyone owns a phone or a computer and we are using those devices to connect with others

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need to

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technology is

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to stay in contact with others. Everyone is busy with work, family and friends but by sending messages to each other we can stay in contact without missing important events in

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birthday is coming up. . Those messages are neutral and the receiver does not need to

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inform someone about sickness or

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problems.

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