In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
In many nations, there is a situation in that
children
introduce massive exercises and hard Use synonyms
work
because someone told them that they would be able to attain everything if they do these. It is true that some goals, achievements and profits can be attained since they Use synonyms
work
hard, but there are still a lot of drawbacks when Use synonyms
children
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in Use synonyms
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way.
We have to recognize that some materials and aims can be gained via Linking Words
efforts
. Use synonyms
For example
, students can attain high grades in a testing exam if they insist on learning abundant knowledge. Linking Words
In other words
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children
can achieve some reasonable and practical aims through their own Use synonyms
efforts
. From another perspective, students can learn the significance of persistence and establish a positive attitude toward their lives once they Use synonyms
work
hard and Use synonyms
thus
win in a competition. As reported by previous papers, kids are more likely to hold the trait of persistence when they accomplish a thing through their own Linking Words
efforts
.
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However
, the word ''Linking Words
efforts
can fulfil everything'' exaggerates the effectiveness of endeavour and persistence under some conditions, which easily causes Use synonyms
children
's over-confidence and rises negative mood. Use synonyms
For instance
, if a kid tries to solve an equation which requires complex math knowledge, there is no doubt that they will face failure even though they pay full energy. At that moment, if they are persuaded by Linking Words
this
belief, Linking Words
then
they will fall into deep self-blame and Linking Words
thus
suspect their own abilities. Linking Words
Therefore
, Linking Words
children
should aware that they cannot fulfil something by only working hard, while wealth, knowledge, health and age are vital factors.
In conclusion, people not only need to encourage their kids to persist but Use synonyms
also
let them know that something cannot be achieved by endeavour only.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...