In the past, people used to travel abroad to look for many differences from their home country. Nowadays, cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Undoubtedly, cities around the world have been suffering influences from outside, and as
result
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,
places
became
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too similar to each other and lost their identity.
Besides
, globalism is opening the market and many
countries
are
making
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business with each other, and the population are accessing imported
products
easiest.
Firstly
, the main reason is globalization which provides exchanges between people from many
places
.
For instance
, I've been to South Africa and there I had wonderful experiences
such
as visiting a famous vinery in the mountain around, and I had a candle dinner with my wife in recognised restaurants. In fact, the point is, I felt as my
last
travel to Europe, where I visited similar
places
as I could enjoy in South Africa. To be honest, I'm not an expert and I'm bringing up a fact about those who immigrated to another land and took with them their unique style, and obviously, applied it there.
Secondly
, the open market
provides
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companies to export and import
products
from many
places
.
For example
, China has been
making
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business in many
countries
around the world and no matter what you buy, probably is written the phrase by China.
Besides
, another example is
products
by Apple CO,
according to
an article, only North Corea, Cuba, and other communist
countries
don't commercialize these
products
, and as
result
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, around 90% of
countries
on the earth are using an iPhone, Macbook, and so
.
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In my opinion,
this
guarantees equality for humanity.
To conclude
, the open market is vital for the economy, and it can improve folks' development,
however
, authorities should work hard to boost the financial situation without losing their own style.
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