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university should accept equal numbers of male and female student in every subject .agree /disagree

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some people think each
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 would have accepted in equal numbers in every academic subject. while in my opinion man and woman ought to have the same educational opportunities, don’t agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of males and females in various courses. Having the same number of men and women in every subject is unrealistic.
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, if we want to accept the same number of
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 we must have equal numbers of participants.Some fields of study are more popular by one
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 than another.
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 , in nursing , most women tend to study
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 field and there are a few male participants it would be impossible to fill
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 course if a fifth per cent of places needed to go to a male . Accepting people according just to their
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 is somehow unfair . Universities should accept
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 regardless of
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 and just by considering their criteria and their academic background.
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 should be accepted due to their effort .in
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 way , males and females must know they will be accepted if they work hard to get a good mark .
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, if a woman student is the best candidate for a place on the course , it would be wrong to reject her in favour of a male with lower grades and fewer qualifications. In way of conclusion, while there are various opinions relating to the admission of universities, I think that
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 must be accepted based on their merit. and it would be unfair to change to a selection procedure based on
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.

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