increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?
In
this
world
we can easily Add a comma
,world
studying
abroad because of the improvement Change the verb form
study
be studying
of
technologies and Change preposition
in
transportations
. Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
Furthermore
, there are myriad of
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apply
students
continue
their Correct pronoun usage
who continue
study
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studies
to
foreign Change preposition
in
countries
. In addition
, they can earn lots of knowledge that their hometown do
not provide it and the Correct subject-verb agreement
does
countries
that get lots of students
from other countries
can increase their human power too. However
, this
trend also
has several drawbacks too. In this
essay
I will focus on these points and will emphasize Add a comma
,essay
it
more.
To start with, Correct pronoun usage
them
students
can gain new knowledge which their countries
do not have it. Additionally
, they also
can exchanging
cultures with some local Change the verb form
exchange
be exchanging
students
from the country
that they live in. Government
could Add an article
The government
also
improve their country
by receiving multitudes of foreign students
and make
them work in Wrong verb form
making
this
country
. For example
; Japan is the best country
that you may pick if you are taking chemistry
and pharmacy major because Correct article usage
a chemistry
this
country
has remarkable
reputation for these 2 sectors, and Add an article
a remarkable
also
you can easily accepted
in many chemical Change the verb form
be accepted
accept
industry
after Change to a plural noun
industries
graduated
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graduating
university
in Japan.
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a university
Nevertheless
, there are also
several demerits that you can also
gain if you are not cautious enough. For instance
; if you are choosing doctor
as your major, there are some Add an article
a doctor
countries
that will restrict you to not come back to your own country
because you already learn and acquire knowledge from this
country
and receiving
some scholarships, so Wrong verb form
received
that
they want you to Correct word choice
apply
Correct your spelling
pay back
payback
their gratitude by working for several years in their Correct your spelling
pay back
country
without going back to your own nation.
To conclude, extending your education to other
Correct quantifier usage
another
country
is such
a brilliant decision but, you must also
pay attention with
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...