increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

In
this
world
Add a comma
,world
show examples
we can easily
studying
Change the verb form
study
be studying
show examples
abroad because of the improvement
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
technologies and
transportations
Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
show examples
.
Furthermore
, there are myriad
of
Change preposition
apply
show examples
students
continue
Correct pronoun usage
who continue
show examples
their
study
Fix the agreement mistake
studies
show examples
to
Change preposition
in
show examples
foreign
countries
.
In addition
, they can earn lots of knowledge that their hometown
do
Correct subject-verb agreement
does
show examples
not provide it and the
countries
that get lots of
students
from other
countries
can increase their human power too.
However
,
this
trend
also
has several drawbacks too. In
this
essay
Add a comma
,essay
show examples
I will focus on these points and will emphasize
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
show examples
more. To start with,
students
can gain new knowledge which their
countries
do not have it.
Additionally
, they
also
can
exchanging
Change the verb form
exchange
be exchanging
show examples
cultures with some local
students
from the
country
that they live in.
Government
Add an article
The government
show examples
could
also
improve their
country
by receiving multitudes of foreign
students
and
make
Wrong verb form
making
show examples
them work in
this
country
.
For example
; Japan is the best
country
that you may pick if you are taking
chemistry
Correct article usage
a chemistry
show examples
and pharmacy major because
this
country
has
remarkable
Add an article
a remarkable
show examples
reputation for these 2 sectors, and
also
you can easily
accepted
Change the verb form
be accepted
accept
show examples
in many chemical
industry
Change to a plural noun
industries
show examples
after
graduated
Wrong verb form
graduating
show examples
from
university
Correct article usage
a university
show examples
in Japan.
Nevertheless
, there are
also
several demerits that you can
also
gain if you are not cautious enough.
For instance
; if you are choosing
doctor
Add an article
a doctor
show examples
as your major, there are some
countries
that will restrict you to not come back to your own
country
because you already learn and acquire knowledge from
this
country
and
receiving
Wrong verb form
received
show examples
some scholarships, so
that
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
they want you to
Correct your spelling
pay back
show examples
payback
Correct your spelling
pay back
show examples
their gratitude by working for several years in their
country
without going back to your own nation. To conclude, extending your education to
other
Correct quantifier usage
another
show examples
country
is
such
a brilliant decision but, you must
also
pay attention
with
Change preposition
to
show examples
every rule in your
country
to study for.
Submitted by riveraeka55 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: