In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. what do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
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health
care services. There are other factors, like genetics, low activity, and fitness, that together with increasing level
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levels
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health
problems
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food
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tremendous
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amounts of calories and fats which have no Correct your spelling
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health
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defeating
defeting
hunger. These excessive Correct your spelling
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calories
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eventually
eventiualy
will be stored as fat in our bodies, which will cause significant Correct your spelling
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health
problems
to our bodies. According to a Correct your spelling
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.
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government
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government
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encourage
incourge
healthy foods business and support them.
In conclusion, obesity and lower physical activity and fitness are major Correct your spelling
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problems
in our society. The major cause of obesity is eating fast food
and to solve these problems
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