In
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world, many countries have a common challenge associated with traffic congestion, so government should impose a new
tax
rate for
car
owners which is heavier than the
last
one and
then
transform all these
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to invest
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better public transportation in cities. In
this
we will explain both benefits and drawbacks of
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measures.
To begin
with, increasing
tax
for
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car
can justify in two main
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.
Firstly
, decreasing in
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of vehicles because the price of
that
is consistedChange to the active voice
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of
tax
. And
this
method can make
people
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not
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to purchase it, by doing
this
the number of
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carFix the agreement mistake
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inChange preposition
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the road
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automatically. Another point is rising in
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of public transport owning to they are cheaper than having
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and
also
more convenient.
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if citizens in
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switch to
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public transport
such
as
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,
skyCorrect word choice
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trainFix the agreement mistake
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they will reduce
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which Correct pronoun usage
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produced by
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carFix the agreement mistake
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. On top of that, society can have
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good air quality and
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ecosystem,
therefore
burdens of
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and doctor
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plummet too.
On the other hand
, life in
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area without
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theCorrect article usage
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major challenge for rural dwellers.
Firstly
, they are limited public transport which
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not cover all
around Change preposition
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the areas.
Secondly
, in
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the journey is longer than in cities, so
people
can not travel without
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.
Furthermore
, imposing heavy
tax relatedAdd a hyphen
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inequality
issueFix the agreement mistake
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.
Consequently
, normal
people
with normal income can not afford it only rich
people
who can pay high
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can
buyCorrect pronoun usage
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.
In conclusion, the
car
tax
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launched by
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are having both advantages about
ameliorateChange the verb form
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traffic trouble and environmental trouble and disadvantages
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with the gap between
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personFix the agreement mistake
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and poor
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in
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.