In recent years, it is considered crucial to
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demandsCorrect article usage
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of
children
as it shows love and
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for them.
Although
it is very good to provide everything yet fulfilling every demand can become a cause
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careless attitude among
children
. According to my point of view, there should be
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and
balanceFix the agreement mistake
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in
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otherwise
it will lead them to develop a selfish
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.
It is needless to say that in
this
competitive era
parents
are doing their best to bring up
children
, but the notion of providing everything should be considered wrong. It is the nature of
children
to desire
things
which they do not have,
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after having those
things
they do not care about
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.
For instance
, some
children
have
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wish to get play station because they are impressed by their
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gadgets, after having play stations they lose interest and demand something
such
as mobile
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, tablets and
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.
Consequently
, they are impressed by their surroundings and try to get each and every luxury which sometimes their
parents
cannot afford. By fulfilling every
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rather than valuing people and societies,
children
are learning to love materialistic
things
.
On the other hand
, giving every luxury to
children
can damage their
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. Because it is human nature
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he gets everything without effort, he never values its importance.
In addition
to it, there should be a reward system for
children
so that they behave well to get something. Bringing up
children
is not a piece of cake for
parents
, to exemplify; it is noticed that
children
of financially affluent families are more indulged in social evils as compared to
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families. The main reason behind
this
ethical gap is their financial status and their
parents
provide them according to their
demands
. Shortly, societies
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never run for materialistic
things
are no place to live other than heaven.
To sum up, providing everything to
children
might not be fruitful to some extent as
children
think it is their right that their
demands
get fulfilled.
Furthermore
, they should be taught to put effort
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getting something so that they can lead a happy and prosperous life on their own