A council is closing a childrens playground because it is not being used often by children. Write a letter to the Council Mayor. In your letter explain

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Dear Sir, My name is Simeon Agbanoma and I am a resident of Victoria Bay Estate located in the Omu Council area. I am writing to discuss the children's
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. Since the
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was established in 1820, many folks utilized the
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as a recreational centre because it was properly developed and all that was needed by folks was available as of
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, in recent times, the
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has been an eye saw since the facility management company switched hands. The
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is now a refuse dumpster for some residents which is unhygienic for children to play and
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why children do not utilize it anymore. Victoria bay residence was designed with a particular niche which is focused on creating a comfortable habitat for families with kids and youngsters. Most of the kids in the vicinity utilize the
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for sporting and recreational activities. The essence of
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creative is why the
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should not be closed.
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, there are several things that I would be suggesting in order to increase the usage of the
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. The management facility should be switched to a better company for better maintenance and the facilities in the
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should be upgraded to modern ones.
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would increase
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usage and make it a beautiful place again. Yours faithfully, Simeon Agbanoma
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