Some people believe people can not solve environmental problems. Whereas, others believe in individuals are responsible for solving environmental problems. discuss both views and give your opinion
While some individuals tend to think that they are not responsible for environmental troubles and that problems happen regardless of
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activities, others are confident that people are able to struggle with a multitude of environmental problems. In my point of view, people are responsible for issues with the earth and have to try to struggle with them using different approaches. Correct your spelling
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essay will examine both points of view and the conclusion will be given.
On the one hand, some humans are confident that there is a number of problems a person cannot be responsible for Linking Words
such
as melting glaciers, soil erosion, and others. Linking Words
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, humans have many different issues that they are forced to decide Linking Words
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, some individuals are poor and have to work overtime to earn Linking Words
higher
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a higher
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, environmental questions become unnecessary for most Linking Words
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men and women.
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On the other hand
, each government is responsible for issues with air pollution, water contamination, soil erosion, and factory emissions. Linking Words
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of
air pollution due to fossil fuel which cars generate every day. Change preposition
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, due to the fact that public transport is Linking Words
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inconvenient
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, humans are compelled to buy cars for saving Correct your spelling
inconvenient
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consequently
, the air becomes contaminated.
To sum up, each individual is compelled to make the world better by energy consumption using public transport, renewable and green energy, and being energy efficient. Linking Words
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, melting glaciers and soil erosion are Linking Words
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