A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

Hey jack, It is been a long time since I haven’t heard from you. I hope you will be fine and your family members are

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doing well. The reason behind writing

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letter to you is that I am really grateful to you as you admitted to taking care of my house and pet during my absence. In fact, once I asked you and you agreed I was chuff. I am flying to Toronto on 21 December

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; I want to inform you

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of the crucial notes. Perhaps, my cell phone number will not be working

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; I will available to answer queries by mail if any occurred. My Tommy is very sensitive in terms of morning walk so request to you please don’t miss his morning work. Apart from that, you can give him food twice a day.

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this

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, do not forget to open the switch of the outside light even though, no one is at home. In the morning, you will find the newspaper hanging on the door as I have instructed to newspaper vendor so, please keep it inside. Rest, you know well and you can find the keys

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my house from my

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. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, MISBAHA

misbahamzahir8

Nov 24, 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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211 words

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