Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individuals/ people do?

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Human beings are posing a serious threat to the surrounding
environment
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. It is true that there are a number of reasons behind
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phenomenon and several solutions should be adopted to improve the situation.
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of all,
irresponsible
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the irresponsible
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disposal of industrial waste into the
environment
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is increasing.
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, some factories have directly discharged chemical waste into rivers without using treatment systems, which leads to widespread water contamination.
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, local residents may suffer from cancer, heart attack and various other diseases by eating seafood that has been poisoned.
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, the problem is caused by gas
emission
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emissions
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from
industrially
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industrial
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zones and exhaust fumes from vehicles commuting on the streets.
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, more or
less
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fewer
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people may get
respiratory
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a respiratory
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, stroke or even lung cancer.
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, it is the application of excessive chemical fertilizers or weed killers
from
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careless farmers that partly makes the
environment
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worse and worse. In order to solve
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pushing problem, each individual should use eco-friendly vehicles
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of cars or other means of
transports
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transport
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that release exhausted fumes into the atmosphere;
otherwise
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, we cannot reduce seriously polluted air quality.
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it is hard to change a habit, consumers should adopt products made from disposal materials
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of using plastic bags. Participating in local
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environment
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environmental
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campaigns is
also
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another effective way to raise people’s awareness.
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, commuters should take public transport rather than
driving
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drive
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to offset carbon emissions. In longer
terms
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term
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, governments should enact laws to reduce
carbon
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the carbon
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footprint or encourage companies to use renewable energy. They
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need to impose a heavy
fine
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fines
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on those who
liter
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litter
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on the street or discharge
wastes
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waste
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without using treatment systems.
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but not least, the authorities should place
decrease
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taxes on public transport to encourage people to use
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kind of transport. In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for
polluted
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a polluted
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environment
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, and steps need to be taken to tackle
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problem.
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