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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course, say how much cooking you’ve done since the course, and suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer.

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Ana Jackson and I was registered as a student in your short cooking
class
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 about Chinese cuisine that was held
last
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 month. I have received your email requesting a review of
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the
 the
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, and I am writing
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 letter with the intention
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 so. I personally find the
class
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 enjoyable. The tutor, Mrs. Yang, left a good impression on me since she was really patient even though I had no basic
skill
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 in cooking.
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, the ingredients that were provided were fresh and had the best quality. As
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a
 result, I definitely feel more confident
while
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 cooking Chinese dishes now. I have been trying out new recipes that I found online and having no trouble along the way. My
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 things to make these days are beef noodle soup
as well as
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 sweet and sour chicken. In the future, I would love to expand my knowledge and learn how to make dishes from another culture. Please let me know if you have any cooking
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class
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 related to French or Indian food available. Thank you in advance and I hope you find my review useful. Yours faithfully, Ana Jackson.

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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider using more varied sentence structures to enhance the flow of the letter.
Task Achievement
Ensure to proofread your letter for minor typographical errors, such as 'theon' instead of 'the on' and 'athe' instead of 'as a'.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter has a clear structure with an appropriate greeting and closing, contributing to its overall clarity.
Task Achievement
You provided specific examples of what you enjoyed about the course and how it impacted your cooking, which adds depth to your feedback.
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