Your friend is celebrating her Birthday soon and has invited you to a party. But you are unable to come because you are going to attend an important meeting that day. Write a letter to your friend and * thank her for the invitation; * explain why you cannot come; * propose to meet on other day; Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows:

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Hi Emily, How are you? Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party on 1st Dec 2022. It’d be great to celebrate your birthday with all of your friends. Unfortunately, I could not join you all. Don’t be mad at me, please. It happens that there will be a meeting with an important client. It will be a day-long meeting. As it has been scheduled and the client will fly in from Hong Kong, I could not cancel the meeting.

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, I would not be able to close a deal worth $100,000.

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, I’m available the following day. I’d like to make it up to you by reserving the whole day for you! Let me know if you are fine with the date.

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, what would you like to do on that day? I shall try my best to fulfil all your wishes! Happy birthday in advance! Hope to see you soon! Cheers, Yi

yi.jun.smile26Sat Nov 26 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

155 words

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