Your friend is celebrating her Birthday soon and has invited you to a party. But you are unable to come because you are going to attend an important meeting that day. Write a letter to your friend and * thank her for the invitation; * explain why you cannot come; * propose to meet on other day; Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows:

#friend #birthday #party #invitation #address

Hi Emily, How are you? Thank you for inviting me to your birthday party on 1st Dec 2022. It’d be great to celebrate your birthday with all of your friends. Unfortunately, I could not join you all. Don’t be mad at me, please. It happens that there will be a meeting with an important client. It will be a day-long meeting. As it has been scheduled and the client will fly in from Hong Kong, I could not cancel the meeting.

Otherwise

, I would not be able to close a deal worth $100,000.

However

, I’m available the following day. I’d like to make it up to you by reserving the whole day for you! Let me know if you are fine with the date.

Also

, what would you like to do on that day? I shall try my best to fulfil all your wishes! Happy birthday in advance! Hope to see you soon! Cheers, Yi

Submitted by yi.jun.smile26 on Sat Nov 26 2022

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

155 words

9.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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