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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment what damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem

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Unfortunately
Unfortunetly
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Unfortunately
,the usage of
plastic
 has become a growing issue
in
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 our planet.In
this
 modern era,
bulks
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,bottles and packaging which are made of elastic look too extremely detrimental
for
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 our atmosphere.In
this
 essay,many adverse impacts of
usage
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the usage
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of plastic
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plastic made
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plastic-made
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stuffs
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stuff
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 and some productive
action
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actions
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 which should be taken by authorities and citizens will be proposed ,before a logical conclusion is drawn.
To begin
 with,there are numerous negative impacts of using
plastic made
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 materials.
First
,
this
 would menace all
creatures
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creature's
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lives
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 including humans and animals.A study by
Oxford’s
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Oxford
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 university found that elastic wastes would consider
as
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the most crucial
factors
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factor
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 which
cause
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causes
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 abundant diseases
such
 as asthma, infertility and obesity ,and it will cause
animal’s
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 deaths.Another problem which requires to be concerned is that,according to New York time magazine published in
may
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 2020 , elastic rubbish
such
 as
Plastic
 disposable containers and clothes are the most essential reason which
lead
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 the global warming. To take around these problems,authorities and citizens should take productive action.One of the possible
solution
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solutions
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 would be increasing
plastic
row
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raw
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 materials prices.If the government try to put high taxes on purchasing
this kind
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these kinds
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 of materials ,
the
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society will lead not use or purchase them.
Secondly
,one immediate remedy is to ban using of
plastic
bulks
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 by
regime
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the regime
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 and
putting
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 some roles on it.
Moreover
,citizens have to obey these roles .As an illustration,they should not purchase clothes made from rubber.
instead
,they should be encouraged to buy clothes and
stuffs
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stuff
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 which are made of wool,cotton and
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bamboo
bambo
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bamboo
. To conclude,
although
plastic
 plays a vital
rule
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role
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 in
citizen’s
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citizens’
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 lives , humans should be more aware of
it’s
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 possible irreversible consequences.
In addition
,
government
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the government
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 must take productive action to solve
this
 problem.
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