Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment what damage does plastics do to the environment? What can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem

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,the usage of
plastic
has become a growing issue
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our planet.In
this
modern era,
bulks
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,bottles and packaging which are made of elastic look too extremely detrimental
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our atmosphere.In
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essay,many adverse impacts of
usage
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of plastic
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plastic made
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stuffs
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and some productive
action
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which should be taken by authorities and citizens will be proposed ,before a logical conclusion is drawn.
To begin
with,there are numerous negative impacts of using
plastic made
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materials.
First
,
this
would menace all
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lives
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including humans and animals.A study by
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university found that elastic wastes would consider
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the most crucial
factors
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which
cause
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abundant diseases
such
as asthma, infertility and obesity ,and it will cause
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deaths.Another problem which requires to be concerned is that,according to New York time magazine published in
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2020 , elastic rubbish
such
as
Plastic
disposable containers and clothes are the most essential reason which
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the global warming. To take around these problems,authorities and citizens should take productive action.One of the possible
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would be increasing
plastic
row
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materials prices.If the government try to put high taxes on purchasing
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of materials ,
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society will lead not use or purchase them.
Secondly
,one immediate remedy is to ban using of
plastic
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by
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and
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some roles on it.
Moreover
,citizens have to obey these roles .As an illustration,they should not purchase clothes made from rubber.
instead
,they should be encouraged to buy clothes and
stuffs
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which are made of wool,cotton and
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bamboo
bambo
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bamboo
. To conclude,
although
plastic
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in
citizen’s
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lives , humans should be more aware of
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possible irreversible consequences.
In addition
,
government
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the government
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must take productive action to solve
this
problem.
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