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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as s result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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The availability and cheapness of junk
food
 buy a large
number
 of
people
 to eat it in unhealthy amounts. Nowadays
people
 have a big
number
 of responsibilities that make them hurry up in every aspect of their lives. An easy way of getting
food
 like
this
 is not always the best and those who eat it constantly may suffer from it. Taking unhealthy
food
 can increase its
price
 which eventually should make it more expensive than eating healthy eats. But because of
people
’s love and the
number
 of restaurants that serve
this
 kind of
food
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 it is hard to increase taxis rapidly. Damage dealt
by
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 meals that have been eaten by the nation needs to be shown by the administration to prove that taxing is a very reasonable move to start solving the current situation. I think that
people
 will react much more calmly to the increasing
price
 when they understand how damaging that
food
 is and the reason behind
this
. Another reason for choosing fast
food
instead
 of normal
food
 is that it is way cheaper.
That is
 why the government is forced to tax junk
food
 in order to be able to subsidise healthy
food
 with money that comes from taxes. In my ,opinion if we make different vegetables, meat, nuts and other things from the list affordable,
people
 may buy them more as there will be no reason to harm their bodies just because it is way cheaper to buy unhealthy eats. To conclude, in my ,opinion there are reasons for the administration to raise taxis on junk
food
 because it can lower the
number
 of
people
 that choose fast
food
 because of its
price
 and availability. With
this
 ,money government will be able to sponsor healthy
food
 because making it affordable may
people
 open more restaurants with these kinds of meals and make
people
 get it at the same speed and for the same
price
 as they were getting bad meals. I personally think that taxing can help to solve situations of
people
 choosing to harm themselves by choosing a diet like
this
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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