In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as s result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The availability and cheapness of junk

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buy a large

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of

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to eat it in unhealthy amounts. Nowadays

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have a big

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of responsibilities that make them hurry up in every aspect of their lives. An easy way of getting

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is not always the best and those who eat it constantly may suffer from it. Taking unhealthy

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can increase its

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which eventually should make it more expensive than eating healthy eats. But because of

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’s love and the

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of restaurants that serve

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kind of

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it is hard to increase taxis rapidly. Damage dealt

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meals that have been eaten by the nation needs to be shown by the administration to prove that taxing is a very reasonable move to start solving the current situation. I think that

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will react much more calmly to the increasing

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when they understand how damaging that

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is and the reason behind

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. Another reason for choosing fast

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instead

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of normal

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is that it is way cheaper.

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why the government is forced to tax junk

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in order to be able to subsidise healthy

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with money that comes from taxes. In my ,opinion if we make different vegetables, meat, nuts and other things from the list affordable,

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may buy them more as there will be no reason to harm their bodies just because it is way cheaper to buy unhealthy eats. To conclude, in my ,opinion there are reasons for the administration to raise taxis on junk

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because it can lower the

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of

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that choose fast

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because of its

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and availability. With

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,money government will be able to sponsor healthy

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because making it affordable may

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open more restaurants with these kinds of meals and make

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get it at the same speed and for the same

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as they were getting bad meals. I personally think that taxing can help to solve situations of

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choosing to harm themselves by choosing a diet like

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