You recently discovered that there are plans to build a new airport in your area and you are not happy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, Say how you found out about the plans Explain what problems your neighbourhood will face Suggest some possible solutions to those problems.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to the program that you have intended to build a new airport in the vicinity of my neighbourhood.
First
and foremost,I am unhappy about
this
construction because it will occur a few problems not only for me but
also
for my neighbours.
Although
I know that there is a demand to have an airport in my city,I believe that the location
that is
planned is not appropriate. To justify my opinion,the reason why it will create an issue for local people is that the aeroplanes produce high noise and it will be disturbing all of us.
Moreover
,there are a lot of children and patients in my street.It will be an intolerable voice for them. It would be better if you could build it in any other part of the city
that is
far from residence or offer compensation in order to have money to purchase a house and move to another part of the city. I hope you will address
this
issue as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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