Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain * Why you are writing to them * Why you think the insurance should not be increased * What you want them to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I could not get on the
flight
from Chennai to London on 24th Nov 2022 due to a faulty immigration system at the airport. I booked the
flight
with your airline 2 months ago and was scheduled to fly to London from Chennai at 21:00 hours on 24th Nov 2022. I reached the airport 3 hours prior to the schedule, checked in my luggage and got my boarding pass as well.
However
, when I approached the immigration counter, there was a problem in fetching my details from the application as it was not matching as per passport in the system when the immigration officer scanned it
Hence
, they did not allow me to board the
flight
and have taken me into the security room. Due to
this
issue, I have missed an important meeting at our London office. I immediately notified my company about the problem and they requested to take the
next
immediate
flight
.
Therefore
, I am requesting you to book the
next
flight
which is on 28th Nov 2022 as soon as possible and as compensation, I would request you to book under business class. Thank you in advance. Yours faithfully, Venkatesh Ravichandran
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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