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People nowdays send than talk on text messages more frequently the Phone What are the reasons for this trend? Do the advantages of texting outweigh the disadvantages?

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these days,
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to
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texting
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 rather than calling. as a
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 there will be many many benefits
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 and negligible drawbacks.
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talk
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 messages.
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nowadays
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, the road
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accident ratio has
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increased.
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of accident
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accident
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accidents
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people
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to people
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 who driving with talking
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on
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phone
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. In that case, texting
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might be declined
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 ratio of an accident.
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,
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someone
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texting
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 when they
free
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 of office work, they can read and reply.
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send
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text
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message
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saved
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 and
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remind
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reminds
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someone
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if someone
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invite
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you
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the
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a
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text
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message
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 and time.
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 you by
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 and time.
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, there are some drawbacks
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, these days
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 because of
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modern
mordan
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modern
 technology. it is
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mainly
 effect on children. they can not know how to talk with
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strangers
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people
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relatives
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. In
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addition
addtion
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addition
, when networking
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companies
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 give some free internet excess or low recharge bill
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therefore
,
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are
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more frequently use
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texting
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 messages rather them
calles
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calls
.
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, when
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can
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the
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they
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people
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texting faster than calls. In conclusion, new technology will bring major
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changes
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changs
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 so.
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texting
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texting
 rather than calls. While
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 the main advantage of
this
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acciendt
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accident
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phone
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 calls has been declined. In my point of view
advantages
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the advantages
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 are more
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than then
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then
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than
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 disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prevalence
  • convenience
  • asynchronous communication
  • non-intrusive
  • social media
  • instant messaging apps
  • misinterpretations
  • emotional nuance
  • immediacy
  • efficiency
  • multitasking
  • relationship building
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