In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

Today's

lifestyle

has been modified to a busy

lifestyle

.

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traditional

festivals

and celebrations have vanished in some parts of the world.

This

essay will carefully examine the several

reasons

for

this

case and the several actions that could be taken to

this

case in the following paragraphs. There are many possible

reasons

for

this

situation

.

For example

, a busy life schedule might be a reason. Everyone has a busy

lifestyle

, so they don't have enough time to spend on their traditional

festivals

.

For instance

, in Sri Lanka Ramazan, Deepavali and easter Fridays are not commercial holidays. These are only public holidays. So those who work in the private sector need to get a holiday or half-day work because of that they don't have

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to prepare for

festivals

. Another reason new

generations

are not interested in

festivals

. They are trying to relax or go out with their friends during these festival holidays. And so we see the types of possible

reasons

for

this

situation

. There are many solutions that could be taken for

this

situation

.

For example

to give the knowledge and experience to current

generations

about our festival celebration.

As a result

, new

generations

might be aware of the celebration

then

they will pass to future

generations

.

Additionally

,another moving way is

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use the media to motivate individuals to celebrate.

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. they will prepare the festival for a week. we see

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many solutions that could be taken to

this

situation

. we saw from the above how the

lifestyle

has been modified. we

also

saw how vanished the festival in some parts of the world. In conclusion, we could say that

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the

reasons

and the actions that could be taken

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outlined above