Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Today, it is a common belief that
technology
is embody people
to be more
sociable Add an article
a more
the more
butterfly
, whilst some think Fix the agreement mistake
butterflies
hi tech
Add a hyphen
hi-tech
making
them unsociable. In my opinion, while the development of cutting-edge Wrong verb form
makes
technology
, when put to proper use, can be very helpful in interacting, it can actually make us less willing to relate with others
. Both views will be discussed in the essay.
To begin
with, recently a technological advancement has improved social skills and made the world a global village. This
makes it possible for friends and families at
the extreme spectrum of the world to get in touch with each other. It has basically taken away the physical barrier that might be created Change preposition
on
as a result
of geographical location and also
effected
Correct your spelling
affected
in
our Change preposition
apply
communicate
skills. Replace the word
communication
For example
, you able
to Add a missing verb
are able
chatted
or via video calls with your friend, who Wrong verb form
chat
live
in another country due to modern Change the verb form
lives
technology
, namely social media ( «Instagram», «WhatsApp» and so on). Moreover
, high tech has multitude
of Add an article
a multitude
advantage
and nowadays that there are more opportunities to socialize due to recent Fix the agreement mistake
advantages
technology
.
In contrast
, many people
are addicted to technology
, which prevents them from socializing with others
around them. This
occurs because with
few exceptions, Add the comma(s)
,with
people
are now preoccupied with watching movies on television, chatting online or playing music and video games rather than discussing at length with family members, making new friends or having face-to-face interactions with their neighbours. For instance
, we realized that our youths prefer Add the particle
to surf
surf
the web, Wrong verb form
surfing
browser
pages or Replace the word
browsing
to be
in virtual reality and it depends on young Change the verb form
being
people
choices.
To conclude, while Change noun form
people's
through
the use of Change preposition
apply
technology
can make people
socialize with others
outside their surroundings, I am of the view that the addiction to technology
has reduced the time available for people
to interact with others
in their environment. This
has make
Change the verb form
made
people
less sociable.Submitted by Allazhar on
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