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Nowadays many countries are facing problems related to waste disposal. Why is this the case? How can this issue be tackled?

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 day and age,
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 disposal has become a matter of great concern in some parts of the world.
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 is mainly due to the lack of land for
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 disposal, but it can be controlled by arranging land for
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 management. Amongst the major factors, having no
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 to discard the
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 is the most contributing significant element.
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 is because an increase in population, and building more industries causes no
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 to discard
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.
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, the lack of disposable methods is another concern.
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 to say, there is no adequate way for garbage
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 as incineration method and land refill. In India,
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, a survey was conducted by researchers in which they revealed that 80% of
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 was seen on road. Turning to solutions, the government ought to come forward by arranging
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 for
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 management. By doing
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, there is a lot of
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 to discard
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. Not only
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, researchers must conduct research sessions to identify new methods of
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 disposal. It assists to decrease wastage. In conclusion, despite the fact that
waste
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 disposal is a major concern we are facing today, if appropriate actions are not taken by governing bodies and individuals it can be controlled to a greater extent.
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