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Nowadays many countries are facing problems related to waste disposal. Why is this the case? How can this issue be tackled?

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In
this
 day and age,
waste
 disposal has become a matter of great concern in some parts of the world.
This
 is mainly due to the lack of land for
waste
 disposal, but it can be controlled by arranging land for
waste
 management. Amongst the major factors, having no
space
 to discard the
waste
 is the most contributing significant element.
This
 is because an increase in population, and building more industries causes no
space
 to discard
waste
.
Moreover
, the lack of disposable methods is another concern.
That is
 to say, there is no adequate way for garbage
such
 as incineration method and land refill. In India,
for instance
, a survey was conducted by researchers in which they revealed that 80% of
waste
 was seen on road. Turning to solutions, the government ought to come forward by arranging
space
 for
waste
 management. By doing
this
, there is a lot of
space
 to discard
waste
. Not only
this
, researchers must conduct research sessions to identify new methods of
waste
 disposal. It assists to decrease wastage. In conclusion, despite the fact that
waste
 disposal is a major concern we are facing today, if appropriate actions are not taken by governing bodies and individuals it can be controlled to a greater extent.
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