At the present time, the popualtion of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
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in many countries
the percentage of elderly people
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certain
countries
where it is the other way around. Is having less
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people
something every country should strive for or not?
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with, the advantages of the type of population
where there are more young citizens are quite obvious. Firstly
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Secondly
, in these situations, countries
have a bigger amount of reproductive adults. This
makes the population
grow significantly. For example
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This
means that the population
is decreasing rapidly, which makes elderly people
dominant. Lastly
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can save up money for more important things such
as bettering the school system.
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conditions are not too good, which is something that should try to be changed.
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