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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this ?

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Nowadays, myriads of
people
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 are keen on searching for background information about their
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. There are certain factors behind
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 trend
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 as assurance of safety, special connection towards home, and
superstitions
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. In order to find history, they ought to consult senior citizens in their neighbourhood or on the internet.
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, it is an undeniable fact that
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 safety is paramount. In order to ensure that the background details are nessecery.
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, a survey was conducted by the Harvard School Of Engineering in 2018 about
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 safety in old
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.
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, about 80 per cent of
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 who participated in
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 survey said that old
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 are risky. Some of the old
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 collapsed in the UK in 2018 because of not strong enough. In light of the above-mentioned examples, the officialdom had taken some positive steps towards
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 issue by inspecting old
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 every 2 years.
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 reason is some
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 believe in
superstitions
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 like their
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 is haunted by evil. To cite an example, a piece of news that was published in The Hindu Newspaper about scary haunted homes in the UK and many
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 suffering from them. If there is any doubt about
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 society could cleanse their
buildings
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 or change their
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 in possible ways. The best way to research the history of
buildings
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 is by consulting elderly
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 who lived near because many of them are lived there for many years. Talking to them definitely discovers hidden things about the old property.
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, to uncover
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,the internet is the best choice to research
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. Most countries are updated about haunted
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 online. Apart from that old newspapers and recorded news may be helpful in
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 scenario. As mentioned earlier,
people
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 could get knowledge about their
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 from the elderly society nearby. In conclusion, there are a plethora of justifications for searching the history of the residence and different ways.
Buildings
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' security and superstitious beliefs are the reason main reasons behind
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.To find answers they seek help from the internet or from the old communities in their neighbourhood.
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