Air pollution is currently a big issue in most industrialized cities causing respiratory problems and changes in weather patterns. What do you think are the causes of this? What measures can be taken to reduce air pollution?

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drastically

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to the past. It can clearly be seen that many areas have turned into

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industrialized zone.

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a negative consequences

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our health and weather.

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, there are several

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in the following paragraph. The

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point is too

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factories

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and it spread all over the cities.

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types of toxic chemical which

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our respiratory system if we breathe in too much.

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, we can stop

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up new law where each

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factories

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have a limit to release

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waste, so the

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will be more clean and

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to our lungs. A related factor is gasoline vehicles. On average, people usually dominate individual private

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the population

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there are over 7

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nowadays. According to the graph of

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average

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cause an enormous daily.

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, our cities are full of fog with

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.

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, we can reduce

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of private vehicles by

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public transportation

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, so the average amount of

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will decrease. In conclusion. The main reason which toxical

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and gasoline

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. If we wish to change our environment,

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of

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demolished. Meanwhile, we can switch to

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public vehicles to decrease the number of private

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. If we combine both of these methods

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will be much greater to our body and weather.