People sleeps less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effects does it have on individuals and on society?

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it's true that most people nowadays are
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, and their lack of sleep is influenced by a variety of factors. Personally, losing shuteye may
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cause a myriad of physical and mental issues. People now tend to have less sleeping time and
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many reasons.
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, the jobs market is becoming more competitive than before which may lead most members of society to work harder and longer. Namely, if the person works for an inordinate amount of time from the very beginning of the day until late in the evening which is, unfortunately, the common case currently,
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cutting in their sleep.
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, more distractions are available, especially after technology advances.
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, a recent study showed that sleep pattern disturbances are caused by the elevation of technology consumption. the primary effects of not getting adequate sleeping time can be divided into two main aspects. Physically, being
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impedes the body
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and
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itself well.
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, expediates the onset of serious diseases like inflammation, diabetes and obesity. In terms of mental problems, getting less sleep has a devastating impact on our mental health. To illustrate, neuroscience proved that symptoms
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as hormonal imbalances and irritable feelings are
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sleeping less than the consensus hours of shuteye which is an average of 8 hours a day. In conclusion, people are more sleep deprived than the previous generations
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longer working hours and too many distractions draining our mental peace and the effect is that many are physically tired and mentally suffering to the point of exhaustion.
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