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Q: Some people say that at all levels of education, from primary school to university, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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In the contemporary era, many flok think that our
education
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 system is providing only theoretical knowledge to students rather than practical skills. The following paragraph would highlight my perspective which leads to a logical conclusion. In schools, teachers are giving homework to students which are based on
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. No doubt,
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 gives knowledge and facts to pupils, but it does not guide them on how to utilise
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 knowledge in future.
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,if a teacher gives a written assignment to his class, and he does not highlight the advantages and disadvantages of the topic,
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 the students only focus on written
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 and do not gain anything from the topic. Another pivotal aspect is that in science subjects, practical
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 is very important.
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,if a medical student is trying to memorise the
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 of an experiment, but his instructor does not tell him how to perform it, the student will completely fail in the future due to the lack of practical skills. Moving
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, from the primary level to higher
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, theories are the main source of information and practical
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 is completely ignored which causes a lot of damage to the infrastructure of the
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 system. To recapitulate, because of the aforementioned reasons, we may safely conclude that both
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 and practical
work
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 is preponderant in
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.
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