You are living in a city in a foreign country and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit your for several days. Write an letter

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Dear Dian I am glad to hear about your visit to America

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week for just relaxing and travelling. I cannot express my happiness in words.

First

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of all, I can and should say that we are going to meet after 1 year and I hope you have been doing great all

this

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time. I am writing to ask you a big favour and do not forget about it. I hope and I need my special things from my home. I would be blissfully happy if you could come and bring them along with you. The

first

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thing is my essential book about being a successful businessman. It was given to me by my best friend. It is absolutely necessary to me for my life.

Secondly

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, I want to eat the cake which was prepared by my mother. Because they are really yummy. I hope it is not difficult and you will cause your confidence. Do not worry, call me and send your location when you visit America. I try to pick up you from the airport. I am not waiting much time. Yours faithfully, Diana Carmell.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

187 words

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