A lot of young people do not know how to manage their money when graduating from high school. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to teach them this important skill?
In the modern world, an increasing number of youngsters fail to develop a sensible way of how to deal with their fortune when they finish secondary school. There are several reasons accountable for
this
, and I will discuss how to make them aware of this
vital skill.
A number of factors should be responsible for this
phenomenon. Firstly
, students mainly acquire academic knowledge, such
as maths, science and history, in institutions rather than financial skills. Consequently
, they have no idea about how to manage their income and how to save money in the future. Secondly
, many teenagers are so spoiled by their parents
in the present day that they do not care about wealth management. For example
, nowadays, parents
tend to satisfy whatever their children ask for, which means that teenagers will no longer treasure what they get because they acquire their fortune too easily.
There is no doubt that concerted efforts from parents
and schools are required to raise awareness of money management among the young generation. To illustrate, schools should take responsibility to emphasize the importance of managing wealth, which is essential for students to develop a feasible practice of how to manage their property. Besides
, adults should cultivate their offspring an attitude that every member of society has the need to earn and spend money after entering the workforce, and they should be aware of this
and use their fortune wisely. For instance
, parents
should encourage their children to manage wealth at an early stage and teach them the skills.
In conclusion, the lack of relevant education in institutions and the spoiled love from the family should be responsible for this
problem, and both schools and parents
should try their best to impart financial knowledge to youngsters.Submitted by tincel on
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