A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties

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Dear Sussan, Hope you and your family all are well. As I

told

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youtold

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, I plan to go

the

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to the

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annual office outstation visit

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apply

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week.

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, as you met in the coffee shop

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apply

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last

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Monday,

your

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you

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told

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were told

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that

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me that

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you can take care

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of my

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bobby and my home during

this

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period.

This

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tour is mainly focusing outstations which are located

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apply

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far away from our town. But if you want to contact me, your can call my mobile and all of our staff

accommodated

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are accommodated

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in one hotel during

this

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period. That

Hotel

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name is “The Summer”,It is very famous in

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area.

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, if my mobile not working, you can contact

this

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hotel from

this

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number (Contact No – 0999345345) and I will get back

you

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to you

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my earliest. My pet always knows about you. She is

also

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very friendly and playful. But she has some

issue

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issues

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with

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her leg while

the

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apply

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attacking birds in the garden.

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, she has been taking some medicines for that and she likes to eat fish with cow milk. If you give the meals

for

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2 times it is enough for her day. I want to remind you that please open the windows daily.

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, switching the living room daily

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bobby

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a bobby

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nightmare to dark. I will update you most interesting while on my trip. Best Regards, Anne

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

222 words

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Give contact details for when you are away Give instructions about how to care for your pet Describe other household duties

Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Today, more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?.

Some think the best way to reduce the time people spend in travelling to work is to replace the parks and gardens close to the city centres with apartment buildings where commuters can live, while other disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose higher taxes on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?