Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In recent decades, environmental problems are immediately influencing birth and death. Especially particular species of plants and animals are losing and degrading, which has been the main issue in recent years.
In addition
air, water, and soil pollutions are the most important environmental problems.
To begin
with, The loss of particular species of plants and animals initiates an imbalanced ecosystem, which is why in terms of biology, the food chain is lost,
for example
, there is nothing left for mammals and herbivores to eat, and their predators are too facing famine.
Moreover
, it might be started by several factors. More animals will be extinct soon, the reasons are their eating habits and habitats can be destroyed by natural selection and natural disasters, etc. Another trouble, there might be a polluted environment. These days, industrial evolution and human work are affected rather than calamities,
for instance
, air and water pollution are made by our consumption (smoke, vehicle fumes, and substances). They usually spread into the atmosphere, which contains chemical harmful ingredients. What is more, nowadays traffic congestion, and overcrowded are big issues in our surroundings. These are affected not only in the human body but
also
in living things and other organisms that are absolutely shown negative results. All in all, there are a number of issues being influenced in direct and indirect ways. Most of them are environmental problems. In my perspective, we do not have any action against natural disasters and selections.
Furthermore
, for humans, we might have a chance to improve and terminate our earlier vandalisms and actions.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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