Many museums charge for admission while others are free? do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantage?

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this

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present-day world, myriads of

museums

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charge for

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pass

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whereas other

museums

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provide free

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. There are certain reasons for the trend of

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fee

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such

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as

for

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profit,

maintence

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maintenance

, and control rush in the

museum

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. Apart from

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, people

gives

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more value and respect to

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historical

things

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if there is a

fees

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. I believe that

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payment has a plethora of merits rather than demerits. There are many benefits

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charging money for

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entry

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ticket

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.

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, the Government could use

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income for

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the maintence

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maintence

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maintenance

of

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the museum

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museum

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I mean, in time

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precious historical

things

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become damaged as

years

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goes

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. In order to keep objects or

things

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for

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next

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the next

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generation, it needs money. To cite an example, the scientists from Mauritius Island are keeping

disappeared

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the disappeared

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Dodo

birds

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skull

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in their

museum

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since

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many years. They spend about 1 million amount to keep that skull secure from deterioration.

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, the authorities can control

rush

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and protect

things

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in the

museum

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by

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an

entry

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charge.

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what

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I mean, people have a

behavior

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of

use

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free

things

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without

a

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respect or value.

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, a piece of news was published in a reputed newspaper about destroyed historical objects in an Indian

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in 2016. It was because of the visitors who did not give importance to a group of fragile

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.

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, the profit factor from

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the museum

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museum

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museums

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for

nation’s

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economic growth as a part of tourism. To elucidate

further

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,

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museum

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the museum

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itself is an attraction for tourists as it exhibits

history

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the history

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and

cultural

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culture

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of that specific place. There are many cultures and histories embedded in our world as all are unique. A good example

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this

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is different stone-age

artifacts

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in various countries. If a

museum

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is well maintained, tourists definitely have a temptation to visit that

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and through

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this

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the state could get profit and it may pave the way for developments and growth.

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, there are some

museums

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that allows

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allows

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free

entrance

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may be because

of

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under charity basis. Probably they only wish to share

the

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apply

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knowledge of history and culture.

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, a famous

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in Thailand provides a free

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in

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their state

museum

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to share knowledge about their unique culture and history,

as a result

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of

this

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many

archeological

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students visits there every year for educational purpose. In conclusion, it is stated that having

an

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entry fees

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entry

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fees is

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benefit

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for making profits, controlling rush, and increasing the value of

artifacts

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artefacts

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,

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some of the

museums

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allows

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free

entry

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for educational purpose.