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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

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The map illustrates how the public park had been changed between 1950 and so22. From an overall perspective, it is evident that all of the facilities have been replaced and their more convenient plans for visitors how. Looking at the graph in more detail, we can see a fountain in the centre of Grange playground in 1920.
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, use gardens are on the left side of the square, which was surrounded by seats and the stage for musicians was in the middle of the two rose gardens.
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, there was a glasshouse beside the entrance, which is on Eldon Street. A pond for water plants was near the rose field beside the entrance on Arnold Avenue. After development, the rose field has become the centre of grange park which is surrounded by seats.
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, the stage has been transformed into an amphitheatre for concerts. Children's Play area and Cafe are the new stores which replaced the rose garden and pond for water plants. What's more, the entrance underground car place has been built near the water feature, which places used to be a glasshouse.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recreational facilities
  • landscaping
  • naturalistic
  • amenities
  • formal gardens
  • ergonomic
  • symmetric designs
  • inclusive
  • accessible
  • accommodations
  • native plant species
  • societal changes
  • visitor services
  • community events
  • evolution
  • modern playgrounds
  • wildflower meadows
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