Some people believe it’s better for children to have stay-at-home mothers while others believe it’s better for mothers to work. Which do you think is better for a child, a working or a stay-at-home mother? Use ideas and information from the article to support your ideas.
Nowadays, the industry and technology world quickly have been developing. Women now take part in the industry and technology that are progressing. Women work in many different businesses.
However
, some women have children
. Some argue that mothers
working in a job is
inappropriate for (raising) their Change the verb form
are
children
while others claim that it is beneficial for children
. From my point of view, mothers
having to stay at home
is better for children
because mothers
play an important role in growing up children
. Moreover
, Children
Change noun form
Children's
education
starts in the family and mothers
are a significant factor.
Firstly
, the main advantage of mothers
having stay
at Add an article
a stay
home
is that mothers
usually help children
’s needs. These helps
are an obligation for Change the wording
help
bits of help
children
since they cannot solve their entire problems themself. For this
reason, children
need their mothers
. For example
, children
cannot cook food. If mothers
do not feed their children
in a nice way, children
may have some health problems.
Secondly
, children
Change noun form
children's
education
begins in the family and mothers
have a major significance in this
education
. Mothers
should teach life
to their children
instead
of working in a business because this
education
may affect children
’s all life
. For example
, children
who do not take good education
from their mothers
may have difficulty in school life
, work-
Correct your spelling
work life
life
and social life
.
To sum up, whether mothers
have Fix the infinitive
to stay
stay
at Change the verb form
stayed
home
or not is a controversial issue. There are different opinions on this
issue. It is in
my belief that it’s better for Change preposition
apply
children
to have stay at
Add a hyphen
stay-at-home
home
mothers
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