Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree
To agree or disagree with the statements that what should and should not be taught to
students
is an important issue. Putting the discussion in a wider context. that statement
has always been debatable. Even though some people
think that students
should be taught academic knowledge
. I wholeheartedly believe that students
also
should taught skills
such
as cooking or anything else not just academics. First,
I will discuss some arguments that support my ideas about this
statement
. After which some aspects against that will be presented.
On the one hand, some people
agree with this
statement
for some reasons
. One of the reasons
is that probably think that smart people
are when you have high academic knowledge
, then
many people
must be respectful and proud of you if they have good knowledge
mainly in maths or sciences. The best example to illustrate that is
if you are good in sciences, a lot of people
argue that you will be successful in your life, you will be a billionaire in future. But in fact, success does not depend on your academic knowledge
. It will become if you are not giving up, diligently and keep trying. I agree that academic knowledge
should be taught so students
can pass exams but skills
are important as well.
On the other hand
, many people
disagree with this
statement
for many convincing reasons
. The Most important reason is that education is crucial to increasing skills
. For Instance
, nowadays in school, students
are not taught just about academic knowledge
by their teachers, they also
must have skills
beyond their regular classes such
as cooking, swimming, etc in order to relax their brain from stress too much because of sciences. Academic and skill are balanced. That is
more beneficial to having both. it is not a big problem.
All in all, when all the specific reasons
and relevant examples are considered and evaluated. I strongly disagree with that statement
because Academic knowledge
is as important as skills
too. students
should taught both of those.Submitted by arniaqlina44 on
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coherence cohesion
Work on your logical structure. The introduction could be clearer, outlining the main arguments you plan to cover in the essay. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea and logically transition to the next.
task achievement
Improve the clarity and comprehensiveness of your ideas. Some sentences are a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Additionally, work on expressing your points in a clearer manner without ambiguity.
task achievement
Good use of examples to support your points.
coherence cohesion
The conclusion effectively summarizes your position and restates the importance of both academic and practical skills.