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Some people argue that student should read histry in school,other opine that they should read technology. discuss both views and give your opinio.

#people #student #histry #school #opine #technology #opinio
Some citizens claim that students
needs
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 to read
history
 in school,
others
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while others
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 argue that children should read about
technology
 articles.
Although
 reading about
technology
 is an essential aspect
in
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of
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 life nowadays, I believe that reading
history
 in school is vital because students can learn from
the
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past events and it
help
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helps
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 them become clever citizens. On the one hand, learning about
technology
 is an important aspect nowadays because most of the
acacemic
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academic
assigments
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assignments
 are
on line
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online
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.
Also
, young generations feel attracted to
check
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checking
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 on the latest technological gadgets and feel anxious if they do not have
it
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them
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.
Therefore
, many
of
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the
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schools provide laptops to all children for free because they send homework through a link.
Therefore
, it is important to
lean
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learn
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 about it. To explain
further
, starting the pandemic situation of covid-19 in 2020, in California most
of
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the
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elementary schools and middle schools give laptops to all their students at the
begining
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beginning
 of the year for free.
However
, I believe there are other aspects
in
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of
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 life that
needs
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need
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 more attention than
this
. On the other hand, most
of
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people
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the people
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 strongly believe that reading
history
 is vital to learn from our past events and learn about our ancestors who fight for our liberty.
Firstly
, those who ignore their past
history
 tend to do the same errors because they pass over
an important aspects
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important aspects
an important aspect
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about
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of
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history
.
Secondly
, they believe that reading about
history
 will bring
proudness
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pride
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 to people and raise awareness of unique events that we overcome.
For instance
, most
of
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the undevelop
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undevelop
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undeveloped
 countries
who
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that
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 ignore
thier
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their
 past,
they
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apply
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tend to make the same mistakes
withing
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within
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 society like choosing many
corrupted
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 prime ministers who make very important political decisions
to
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for
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 their nations. I believe
,
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history
 is a vital aspect to learn in school because we need to
be involve
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 with what
happend
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happened
 in the past and what might
happend
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happen
 in the future. In conclusion,
although
 it is important to learn about
technology
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technological
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 innovations to catch up with the new world, I believe that it is vital to learn about
history
 because it helps us to become aware and take smart decisions to protect our society and avoid
to make
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making
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 the same errors that
happend
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happened
happen
 in the past.
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