You are planning to travel and would like someone to take care of your apartment while you are away. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • explain why you will be away • ask your friend to take care of your apartment • describe the tasks you want your friend to do Begin your letter as follows: Dear……

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Dear Anna, How are you doing? I haven’t seen you for a while. I was overloaded with my work so, unfortunately, I didn’t have enough time to write to you. By the way, I’m writing

this

letter to share with you some good news.

To begin

with, my sister who lives in Canada gave

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birth to my nephew so I want to visit them soon.

Moreover

, they want to arrange a party with the whole family so I definitely have to attend it. I have already booked the trip from 15th of September till 30th of September so I am forced to live

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apartment alone for almost half a month. For that reason, I would like to kindly ask you to take care of my flat and my pet if you had

such

an opportunity. There are no special things that you need to do. I have some flowers so I would like you to fill them with water every week.

Furthermore

, I have a cat so it needs to be fed every day in the middle of the

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and in the evenings. I would really appreciate it if you could help me. I look forward to hearing from you. Love, Eva

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

205 words

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