SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE EDUCATION SYSTEM IS THE ONLY CRITICAL FACTOR TO DEVELOPMENT OF A COUNTRY. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

Nowadays, a number of people believe that in the

development

of the nation the

education

system

is the only critical factor. I majorly agree with the statement.

However

, some other facts

such

as agriculture,

infrastructure

,

industrialisation

and GDP

also

play an essential role in the

development

of the

country

.

First

and foremost, the

education

system

is one of the main factors in the

development

of the

country

. To explain, if the population were educated they get employment which creates a good money flow in the

country

, which increases the economy and help the

country

in

development

.

For example

, after

Korea

split into two parts the

development

of South

Korea

significantly increased to that of North

Korea

because of its

education

system

. In the south ,

Korea

as individuals were educated they got jobs, which helped south

Korea

to stabilize the economy.

However

,

besides

the

education

,

system

other things

such

as

industrialisation

,

infrastructure

and agriculture are important in

development

too. To illustrate if everyone has degrees but there is less employment rate in the

country

then

it will meaningless so the

country

needs

industrialisation

and

infrastructure

to raise employment. In ,addition it will help to grow GDP.

For instance

, in 90’s the

development

rate of India was very slow but nowadays it is developing fast due to its

infrastructure

and

industrialisation

as most graduate people get more job opportunities. In conclusion, the

education

system

is the major factor in the

development

of the

country

,

Nevertheless

Add a comma

,Nevertheless

show examples

some other facts like

infrastructure

and

industrialisation

are

also

important to develop the

country