SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE EDUCATION SYSTEM IS THE ONLY CRITICAL FACTOR TO DEVELOPMENT OF A COUNTRY. TO WHAT EXTEND DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

Nowadays, a number of people believe that in the

development

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of the nation the

education

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system

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is the only critical factor. I majorly agree with the statement.

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, some other facts

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as agriculture,

infrastructure

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,

industrialisation

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and GDP

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play an essential role in the

development

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of the

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.

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and foremost, the

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system

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is one of the main factors in the

development

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of the

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. To explain, if the population were educated they get employment which creates a good money flow in the

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, which increases the economy and help the

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in

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.

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, after

Korea

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split into two parts the

development

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of South

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significantly increased to that of North

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because of its

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system

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. In the south ,

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as individuals were educated they got jobs, which helped south

Korea

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to stabilize the economy.

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,

besides

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the

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,

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other things

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as

industrialisation

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,

infrastructure

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and agriculture are important in

development

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too. To illustrate if everyone has degrees but there is less employment rate in the

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then

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it will meaningless so the

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needs

industrialisation

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and

infrastructure

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to raise employment. In ,addition it will help to grow GDP.

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, in 90’s the

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rate of India was very slow but nowadays it is developing fast due to its

infrastructure

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and

industrialisation

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as most graduate people get more job opportunities. In conclusion, the

education

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system

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is the major factor in the

development

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of the

country

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,

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some other facts like

infrastructure

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and

industrialisation

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are

also

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important to develop the

country

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