You are having a party at your home to celebrate your birthday and you want to use a catering company to organize the food. You had sone excellent food at a catered party at a friend's house. In your letter ask What do they charge They contact details

Dear Sir, I write in reference to the catering of my birthday party which is happening
next
Saturday the 15th of November. I heard amazing reviews about your company,
moreover
, I got a chance to attend a party at one of my friend's place which was catered by you. Not just the food was appetizing, but the management was exquisite as well.
Therefore
, I would like to book your company for catering my birthday bash. I would
also
like to know the price for your service provided to 30 people.
Furthermore
, it will be a 3-course meal,
in addition
, I have
also
decided on a theme for the celebration. Could you possibly provide me with your contact details? I would like to know the address of your company so that we can meet in person and discuss arrangements in detail. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Leo
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