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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Opinions are divided on whether there should be a requirement that
people
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 with professional occupations have to
work
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 in the nation where they were trained or whether they can actively choose where to
work
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. Both arguments have their own reasons and from my perspective, I believe that
people
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 should be free to choose the workplace. Admittedly, there are several reasons to require one person to
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 in the
country
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 where they study in terms of responsibility and the development of that
country
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. Regarding the former, there are many
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 who receive scholarships from governments to follow their higher education, so they have to take the responsibility written in the contracts.
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, many Vietnamese
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 have to
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 for the Singaporean government after receiving a scholarship to study at its best universities
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 as NTU or NUS. As for the latter, keeping professionals is very important for the development of a
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, especially less developed
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 like Vietnam, because these highly skilled workers can perform the hardest tasks as well as follow state-of-the-art technology.
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, I believe that everyone should be free to choose their workplace due to the high tuition fee and their priority. It is undeniable that following higher education in those fields,
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 as doctor or engineering, consumes
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 and their families much money and time and
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 have to put in enormous effort into successfully completing these degrees.
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, they have the right to
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 in
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 where they are paid reasonably.
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, medical graduate
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 in Vietnam can only have low salaries while in other developed
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, doctors are paid significantly higher salaries. With regard to the latter, there are many
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 who want to go abroad for studying and
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 come back to their home
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 and contribute to their abilities.
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 tendency definitely helps developing
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,
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 as Vietnam, narrow down the gap with other
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. In conclusion,
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 there are some cases in that
people
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 with professionals have to
work
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 in the
country
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 where they are trained, I believe that everyone should be free to
work
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 anywhere they wish based on reasonable income and their priorities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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